And as for men, oh my, they are so gorgeous!!! especially a pharaoh. I have a thing for long haired men, so I was quite excited to play his route. Although at first I got a bit upset seeing that he was not a good guy, I was afraid it'd spoil all the excitement 'cause I can't help but feel some remorse making bad choices. But not in this game. I'm not very proud of myself but I didn't really care about anybody as long as I could be with him. Guess that's called passion :) And thank you for making me experience it here!
I can't avoid saying some words about MC. When I started the game I was a bit disappointed I wasn't allowed to give my name to the main character. But quite soon I understood why and accepted it with all my heart! Usually in otome games the female protagonist is so bleak, empty and weak. I realize it's made to fulfill her image with your own personality, it's really you who become a main character in the story. But such shallow images inevitably restrict you in choices you possibly could make. But Margaret is a character with a strong personality. She was indeed so brave, stubborn and sometimes even reckless. For example, in some scenes I felt she was too bold speaking with Ramessu) If I were him I'd lose my patience long time ago. Actually he did kill her in one route but I couldn't even blame him. That's what you get for being so cocky with a "God" lol. In general, it was a pleasure to identify myself with her personality, not to mention that red-haired woman looked really cute.
I agree with the description of the game, the storyline was quite mysterious and captivating. But unfortunately not for long :( Don't get me wrong it's not too short, perhaps, it's even an ideal length but I'd personally prefer reading more! Oh, and sometimes it was quite funny) I fancy a little humor in the story, some moments really made me laugh!
Unfortunately everything was not that perfect. For example, there was some twist in the story when all that “action” started) when she was lost(!) in the desert, being in a group with a bodyguard who was really keeping an eye on her. How could that happen?! I've never seen a desert maybe I imagine it in some wrong way) I guess it's just nothing but sand till the horizon. I would understand if they were wandering in a forest, but a desert!!!
And finally, as always, a language issue. I know there were some corrections. Thank you, Chudah, for this! But it seems you must be a native speaker to understand what was the meaning to make all the right corrections. For instance, Farrukh once said about Margaret something like “You always liked me”. Come on, not possible at all!!! I guess in Russian it was “Òû ìíå âñåãäà íðàâèëàñü”. Just the wrong word order, guys, with quite the opposing meaning:( It had to be “I always liked you”. That's not the only example, but the most crucial. I do realize my English is not that perfect but such silly mistakes in such a great game(( A real fly in the ointment!
All in all, that was a pleasant experience. Thank you for your work! I'll look forward to your next creations with a good translation ;)
